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all right after you login your going to go to you're going to see this page and these are the classes that you have joined the right now that student that you found a previous meaning the part of my English language class and so I click okay and then go to assignments and you will see all the opportunities that you have to use clay to dance when these kids were going to work on the personal essay and we're going to start the response so we start the response and there are the directions for the assignment so I scroll down and his box so I'm going to copy I already copied the essay that I typed up or you can type it here sometimes you'll get the opportunity to make a plan and put your ideas together if that's up to the teacher so I'm going to paste the draft of the essay that I already copied and it's going look like this so he's going to give you this box so I'm going to be sitting here all right there you want to have paragraphs cuz she really likes paragraph all right and then I hit okay all right then and there and I'm here for I can do some spell check I can use thesaurus I can formatted using all of these which are very similar to word and then when I'm ready I'm going to hit so I need to save it in if you are ready to submit it looks like there are at least two errors here or something else nevermind up to 10 times are usually unless you change of that number but the default is 10 time so right now if I see Rihanna's reading it with its algorithm and then they get this piece of information and these are the mistakes that I have so it gives me a nice table and then over here gives me the results of what I want to do and it'll give me some fats highlighted and if I hover over it he'll give me there are no organization or there I mean idea issues are some Portland some supporting idea question let's go to the grammar all right and I have some Elkhorn verbs in this one so I'm going to click I know for me it's going to take me to it right here the score had turned to and how about if I just take out going to take out the end so I told you revise at the bottom do you see that it says okay and I'm going to this is nice because it gives you both the original and this is what you make changes over here so you want to go to the room can we go to the Oakland verbs and I see that the mistake is over here so I'm going to go over here and I'm going to take out the head and that's what you do for all the mistakes soap for mechanics looks is missing capital letters, and you have to be careful you just because it doesn't always mean it had to change this is a computer that we can correct to get help there's a hand I'm here that you can access and you click on the handbook if you're not sure what something means and it'll help you figure out what what Criterion is talking about so after I make all the changes that I want to do right here I will hit them it again little sweetie it again and here we go and then it'll give me every time I submitted will see the error go down I only fix 1 error so there's not a big difference but you'll see all of these please go down and you can keep going keep going then you go back to results so you go back to response you go back to the bottom to revise and you make all the changes that you need to make when you are done you can leave it here in criteria and it saves it and you can also copy this one cuz you're done and it's ready to go and copy out of here paste it into a paste into Google classroom or give your teacher a hard copy and that's how you use criteria and you can use it for all of your assignments if you have any questions after school quickly or ask your teacher thank you

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